Wednesday, February 25, 2015

Feb 25, 2015, the year of Our Lord

This is a link to The Boat online. Note: it's a PDF

We have received unto us rumours of confusion about the specificities of the assignment with which you have been tasked.

These rumours have saddened us greatly. 

IN EFFECT: 

Stop trying to come up with the right answers. 

Don’t worry about how to do this “right”. The answer is potentially irrelevant. 

Here is what is relevant: 

YOU create an analysis structure that YOU apply (groups) - source material - blog, notes, group discussion, confer with teacher, short story, online, etc

YOU can prove or justify or back up anything that you write, so you are, in effect, showing that you have the right answers anyway. We also discussed that format in class 

Thesis (a question, a statement you make, a belief you have, an association you’re making, etc)

Explanation (how does the above work? details, make sure reader gets it)

Example (where do I see the “thing” in the story? the point, the moment, the actual line, the source thing that makes you have the thesis)

Reasoning (how does the example prove or show your thesis (or point) - use logical argument and discussion to show this

Linkage (how is this important and meaningful to your thesis - line it all up and make it fit as a flow of argument that….

New Thesis or Thesis as Proven - proved your point

Pre-read - 

Initial read - style and structure, power words (phrases)

PLOT (why important)

realism
suspense
how the ending is built towards by XYZ
foreshadow

SETTING

mood/atmosphere
specific - East Coast - tone
meaningful/symbolic
OH! creative piece - presentational piece! - texture for the setting

CHARACTER

Dad
Mom 
characterization - who are they, why are they like that, what does it mean? 
extrapolate - push out to your own life and thinking - how do these parents line up with my own? (text to self) 
POV character - arc? 
symbolism in character?

THEME

symbolics that lead out into our world, universals, human psych stuff (things that resonate with all of us) - mother - child relationship (The Leap, etc), but in The Boat it is really specific and different

meaning that each person can pull out - wider meaning - the small becomes large when we look at theme - 

Author/context theme? 







Tuesday, February 24, 2015

Monday, Feb 23, 2015

The Boat - Alistair MacLeod (261 or so)

Apply an analysis structure to the short story - you will have created an analysis structure

digging deep - considering multiple layers of meaning
discuss symbolic elements - there are lots of them
find a way to discuss character and change (this may include POV)
consider your own experience and life - make the link TEXT TO SELF
examine multiple aspects of the story
e.g. plot, setting, character, theme, style/structure, context, author

2. Choose one aspect of the story analysis and break it out into some kind of presentation - audio, video, pictorial, Prezi, musical, artistic in some other way

Could focus on mood and tone, or information, or it could be a combination - it could answer a why, a how, or it could be a creative reaction to some aspect of the story

3. Group work - I mark group work like so: Group Mechanics, dynamics, group effort and collaboration, THEN it becomes an individual mark 

there must be some independent submission of material. 

Group analysis structure, broken into pieces and assigned to different group members

4. Evidence of your thinking - 

in your answers or responses, you need to show me a line of reasoning and logic that led you to whatever you include as the answer

Mr. Lobb is bad teacher

He was mean to Laine - he pushed her and wouldn’t let her write. 

How is that bad? 

Explain. 

The theory is THIS. 

THIS is true because of a, b, c. 

These things in combination creates a logical thesis. 

The thesis is true.

Symbolism

deeper meaning behind something

ASSOCIATIONS!

the connotation’s attached to something

ie a swastika is not just a shape, but it’s now a representation of all the crap they did (metonomy)

there is some personal aspect to deciphering symbolic value

One thing may represent a larger idea and a more complex and multiple idea

That swastika can encapsulate an entire war and the genocide of the Nazis

Same as the SS

It’s encoded in our language and our way of thinking. 

DOG - why does this = the animal?

CHIEN

NEIHC

GOD

Three boys play guns: 

French - PAM!
English - BANG!
Chinese - INCHOW!


Your brain automatically builds a story and a structure around everything it “sees”

Your eye “sees” a tiny bit of data - a shoe, a boat, your mom’s face - the retina captures the light and transfers some electric signal through your optic nerve

Your brain, your sense of reality works, through symbolism. 

Oh hey, there is no end to the symbolic value of things - 50% or more comes from YOUR OWN HEAD

Could a boat also then represent captivity? 

It can be proven. 

It can be a guess at first. 

It may be and it may not be. 

We seek associations - what is like what else? 

We try to think about the small representing the large. 

The simple may represent the huge and complex.

Finding symbolic value is an exercise is seeking context and considering maybes. 

Continue your group work on The Boat in the same structure as we’ve already discussed. 

Now, however, you need to more specifically implement your analysis plan, and I need to see that plan as a separate piece, then see exactly how it was applied. 

Break the plan down into something I would be able to hand out to others. 

ie questions and answers, comment and required response, etc

In your analysis, make sure that you’re hitting these key areas:

Symbolic Elements
Character Arc of the POV character
Character Analysis of the two parents
Use of imagery to create mood and atmosphere. 

Your final analysis on The Boat will be submitted on Friday, but we’re already going to move on to poetry before then. 

You will have only two more days of class time to finish this final summative for short story. Use your time wisely!


rl

Wednesday, February 18, 2015

Wednesday, Feb 18, 2015

Wednesday, Feb 18, 2015 

What do I need to submit? 

TWO creative pieces - Mommy, Daddy (or reasonable facsimile)

What about that crazy video Glosoli? With the kids? 

A plan (framework) for analyzing a short story - (repeatable structure)

A blog on the Blogger site yournamehere.blogspot.com that you can tell me about

 An email to me with YOUR email address!

Next week! We will do a very intense short story analysis of The Boat! 


You will be presenting SOMETHING about that story using the analysis you applied.

Tuesday, Feb 17, 2015

The Fundamental Elements of Setting (from Writer’s Digest)

Here is a list of the specific elements that setting encompasses: (edited by Lobb)

Locale. This relates to broad categories such as a country, state, region, city, and town, as well as to more specific locales, such as a neighborhood, street, house or school. Other locales can include shorelines, islands, farms, rural areas, etc.

Time of year. The time of year is richly evocative and influential in fiction. Significant dates can also be used, such as the anniversary of a death of a character or real person, or the anniversary of a battle, such as the attack on Pearl Harbor.

Time of day.

Elapsed time. Create a sense of pace and perhaps give an opportunity for messing with time. 

Mood and atmosphere. Outer can represent or comment on inner. (pathetic fallacy) (sad rain) PS Sad rain is a sad TROPE - a repeated and by now trite and lame cliche

Climate. Weather and place are a factor in a story - hurricane alley, tornado alley, earthquake alley, snow alley, etc

Eras of historical importance. Important events, wars, or historical periods linked to the plot and theme might include the Civil war, World War II, medieval times, the Bubonic Plague, the gold rush in the 1800s, or the era of slavery in the South. (context)

Social/political/cultural environment. Cultural, political, and social influences can range widely and affect characters in many ways. The social era of a story often influences characters’ values, social and family roles, and sensibilities. (context)

Ancestral influences. In many regions of the United States, the ancestral influences of European countries such as Germany, Ireland, Italy, and Poland are prominent. The cities and bayous of Louisiana are populated with distinctive groups influenced by their Native American, French-Canadian, and African American forebears. Ancestral influences can be depicted in cuisine, dialogue, values, attitudes, and general outlook. (may be interesting in context)

What does the setting contribute? What does it mean? WHAT COULD IT MEAN? 

THEME

What is theme of a story? 

It is some underlay of communication that may come from the author. 

OR IT MAY NOT

Maybe it comes from the reader’s interpretation!

Or maybe, BOTH!
There is an assumption of meaning within the context of the story. 

That is to say, we have to believe (on some level) that everything means something. 

There are layers of meaning and they need to be figured out through some active process that English teachers seem to enjoy and that young people do not. 

Why is that? 

(there is no correct answer - we have to figure out what we know)

why do people actively resist learning, changing and growing? 

Why don’t people want things to be complex? 

Why do people insist on simplicity? 

Because it is easier to understand things if they are simple. 

If things are complex, there may be more at risk - i.e. if the surgery has a lot of complications, the patient could die

Maybe complexity is frightening because it is suggestive that we are missing things and that is not a good feeling. 

It might all be about preventing bad feelings. 

The process of digging into something may involved INFERENCING

INFERRING

Combining your own experiences, ideas and thinking with external source material (text material, situations, etc) to derive a conclusion that has more meaning that the obvious

Requires more of the viewer - 

Theme in a story is something that comes from this combination of elements - viewer + text + writer + context

Twins 

Theme Ideas? 

Relationship issues - domestic conflict - adultery (and what about it?) this story shows that it comes back to hurt you - Karmic nature of adultery and specifically, the thinking and nature of people who engage in it

Themes are universals much of the time - human elements - aspects of our nature that we recognize in the story
Some people who look for theme realize that they’re, in some ways, looking at themselves

THIS IS WHY I FORCE YOU TO USE CONTEXT BECAUSE YOU WERE RAISED IN A CULTURE THAT DOES NOT VALUE KNOWLEDGE AND INFORMATION

The idea is that we’re actually learning more about ourselves, and that can be uncomfortable

Prove your inference, prove your idea, use source material, SHOW YOUR THINKING in your answer, make your reasoning obvious, show the linkage between what you see, what you think and what is the answer, and then you get the “right” answer

Above is what we’re really learning in English class. 

How can we read stuff, learn about it, apply it to ourselves and the world around us, and then make the connection that is meaningful and helps us to grow? 

Can we, as a class, now that we have made some progress in the thinking and ideation behind analysis, we should probably make up some kind of reusable, repeatable, constantly available, analysis scheme or pattern, which we can then apply.

Read first. 

Context for the writer, the story itself, etc. 

Title meaning? Add anything? 

A deeper read. 

Maybe read with a highlighter or pen and note things that STAND OUT

What could that mean - STAND OUT - something where you feel there is some extra meaning, something that requires explanation, definition or further understanding



OR MAYBE, if you're in the other class, you did more like the note below:


The Fundamental Elements of Setting (Writer’s Digest)

Here is a list of the specific elements that setting encompasses: (edited by Lobb)

Locale. This relates to broad categories such as a country, state, region, city, and town, as well as to more specific locales, such as a neighborhood, street, house or school. Other locales can include shorelines, islands, farms, rural areas, etc.

Time of year. The time of year is richly evocative and influential in fiction. Significant dates can also be used, such as the anniversary of a death of a character or real person, or the anniversary of a battle, such as the attack on Pearl Harbor.

Time of day.

Elapsed time. Create a sense of pace and perhaps give an opportunity for messing with time. 

Mood and atmosphere. Outer can represent or comment on inner. (pathetic fallacy) (sad rain)

Climate. Weather and place are a factor in a story - hurricane alley, tornado alley, earthquake alley, snow alley, etc

Eras of historical importance. Important events, wars, or historical periods linked to the plot and theme might include the Civil war, World War II, medieval times, the Bubonic Plague, the gold rush in the 1800s, or the era of slavery in the South. (context)

Social/political/cultural environment. Cultural, political, and social influences can range widely and affect characters in many ways. The social era of a story often influences characters’ values, social and family roles, and sensibilities. (context)

Ancestral influences. In many regions of the United States, the ancestral influences of European countries such as Germany, Ireland, Italy, and Poland are prominent. The cities and bayous of Louisiana are populated with distinctive groups influenced by their Native American, French-Canadian, and African American forebears. Ancestral influences can be depicted in cuisine, dialogue, values, attitudes, and general outlook. (may be interesting in context)

Theme - this is the classic English teacher “thing”

there is a meaning within a story that comes from the reading of it 

we think that it’s a message, but it’s rarely that easy or boring

Fables - as in Aesop’s, present a very simplistic vision of a theme- a MORAL - which is a little lesson or an observation about human nature

Fox and the Grapes - a fox tries to get some grapes, but they’re up too high, he tries a few times, then he leaves and says, I didn’t want them anyway, they’re sour. 

This is a really good observation of human beings when they can’t get what they want.

We need to be able to figure out all the variations and layers that can exist in a story, in a poem, in a shot story, in a novel, in talking to Laine, or in anything really. Right cole? 

So, the idea here is that you need to be able to find the hidden, seek the symbolic, take a guess, look for clues and make associations in order to find the meaning

EVERYTHING means something

Consider theme as an engagement between the writer and the reader

Theme is negotiated

Active process

Twins - 
there is a theme there, something about getting what you deserve, 
about being careful in thinking you’re smarter than those around you, 
considering the negative elements of a marriage or relationship.

Considering layers and deeper meanings makes everything more interesting, and makes you a more active audience member. 

INFERENCE - you (the reader) creates a layer of meaning that isn’t based on the surface information - you DERIVE meaning from a number of elements, including your own thinking!

“Alternatively, inference may be defined as the non-logical, but rational means, through observation of patterns of facts, to indirectly see new meanings and contexts for understanding.” - Wikipedia


it’s about 50-50 between the source and the person making the inference (never believe stats)

There is a collusion between the knowledge and thinking of the viewer and the source material. 

In order to this properly (infer) you need to have schema, prior knowledge, frames of references, base knowledge, etc, etc. 

THIS IS WHY I FORCE YOU TO USE CONTEXT BECAUSE YOU WERE RAISED IN A CULTURE THAT DOES NOT VALUE KNOWLEDGE AND INFORMATION

I love science and math and I hate English because no answers are actually right. 

What about me? 

Prove your inference, prove your idea, use source material, SHOW YOUR THINKING in your answer, make the reasoning obvious, show the linkage between what you see, what you think and what is the answer, and then you get the “right” answer

Can we, as a class, now that we have made some progress in the thinking and ideation behind analysis, we should probably make up some kind of reusable, repeatable, constantly available, analysis scheme or pattern, which we can then apply. 

Analysis Plan

Read the entire piece. 

READ IT AGAIN more carefully, feel free to mark elements (see below)

Look up words to be defined *terms, references, names, places, phrases, etc*

Title analysis - what could it mean? what does it do for the story and reader expectation?  

Author! Who is this person!? What, where, when, why, how? 

Context for the story, the author, the time period, etc

Powerful words, phrases and elements - strong, well written, stand out, seem meaningful, have good description, etc - DISCUSSION AREA/POINT

Plot

Setting

Character/Characterization

Theme

The point is some kind of understanding, appreciation, and deeper thinking about ______________.


Friday, February 13, 2015

Friday, February 13, 2015

Character 

Characterization

Behaviour
Physical Description
Personality/Emotion
Dialogue
Other characters’ perspectives
Symbolic elements
Interactions with others
Context! Where is she? When is she? What is the cultural situation? etc

Protagonist - lead character
the main character
this one is the one in whom we journey to see the story

the protagonist is the representative of the reader

this has a lot of power and adds some interesting elements

Red Dragon - by Thomas Harris

Will Graham - lead character - good guy - FBI agent - profiler, etc

Francis Dolarhyde - serial killer, abuse victime, tormented, lonely, damaged psychopath - antagonist

the switch of POV in Red Dragon is an incredible feeling, and it’s unsettling and it gives us a very different look at the “bad guy”

A Game of Thrones - Bran falls off the tower - SHOCK

lead characters (POV characters) die in this series - very disturbing

People literally LOVE Harry Potter - for real

But that POV comes from the writer and the reader, not the character

We cannot help but to associate with whomever is the POV - this is amazing

The POV of that character is misleading, potentially - Harry Potter’s view of Snape is dead wrong and we just assume he’s right

Secondary characters - they usually exist to reflect something back onto the main elements of the story - the POV, the antagonist, the textures of the setting, etc

Secondaries also act as drivers of plot - they can hurt or help the POV character’s journey - the best secondaries are the lead characters in their own stories - they’re actually doing things - bad secondaries are placeholders

Rich for One Day - 

Read a story of this woman’s POV

Then evaluate her POV - why does she think what she thinks? 

Consider, find evidence and discuss

How do you evaluate her vision of “being rich”?

What is your vision of her life - your opinion?

You have just been given 100 billion dollars and you can only keep it if you spend in a way that I decide is cool/good/awesome/worth it. Convince me to give you the money


February 13, 2015 - The Luckiest Day of the Year - because there is no such thing as bad luck

Wednesday, February 11, 2015

Wednesday, Feb 11, 2015

Twins:

Plot 

What happens in a story

Things happen as a direct cause and effect - things happen in an escalating order/sequence wherein there will be some kind of resolution or ending

STATE of normalcy

STATE is changed

Normalcy is broken!

STATE is flux. 

CRISIS is reached. 

STATE is NEW. 

Dialectic Structure - Hegelian Dialectic (the philosopher was Hegel)

THESIS gives rise to a reaction - ANTHESIS, which conflicts and that energy in conflict creates SYNTHESIS

A plot is a mini-life! 

It’s a microcosm of human experience!

When analyzing plot, what is one thing you can do, using the info above? 

What way can you think about the plot and discuss it and evaluate it? 

You can examine a plot in relation to your own experiences and life.

You can assess the realism of a plot. 

You can map the experiences that make up the plot into a universal human experience. 

Realism doesn’t always mean that things happen in a way that would happen in real life. 

Realism means it happens in a way that feels like the logic is true, if not the specifics. 

Too many coincidences, not enough realism. 

We need to feel like things that happen all happen for a reason - in life, in stories, in games, etc.

Randomness, coincidence, chaos, freaky stuff, all ruin our brain’s feeling of peace and goodness

The ending needs to line up with the opening the other events that occurred. 

We need to be able to follow the story in a consistent flow of understanding that adds up to that ending exactly. 

The “bad” ending might actually be the right ending, and it might feel right. 

The “right” might be the one in which we feel the worst, but we know it’s right. 

causal relationship - one thing sparks the next thing, sparks the next thing, leads to the resolution - action -> reaction

Some of the best stories and movies have an ending that we get hit by - SHORT SHARP SHOCK- short stories in particular use this type of ending

POV

1st person - I, me, my

2nd person - you, your

3rd person omniscient - sees all, knows all, hears, God’s POV - reads minds

3rd person limited - sees what is said, what happens, what can be witnessed physically

(can be tied to a specific character - i.e. where Tom is, the POV is, but it’s still outside him)

Characters

CREATIVE PIECE


WHAT ABOUT YOUR DAD!?  OR A MALE AUTHORITY/PARENTAL/GUARDIAN FIGURE? 

Tuesday, February 10, 2015

Tuesday, Feb 10, 2015

Wing’s Chips (not to be confused with Wang’s Chaps)

You Will

Make with me a little plan to analyse this story:

Read this story (or as much of it as you can before my ADD takes over and I start teaching (hard)

We will break into LGOPs and we will attack a couple of areas of the plan and create some response

Share those out and then we will become amazing. 

Plan of Attack

Read the story. 

9. CONTEXT! - SCHEMA!

who wrote this? 
when? 1920s - that says a LOT
what is the cultural context? 
socio-political? Chinese, French <-> English, Quebec
are there “attachments” that affect our thinking? - BIG ideas. 

2. Characters

Development/Arc
Dialogue

3. Plot

4. Setting

a) Mood/Atmosphere

5. Theme

a) moral values

6. Style/Structure

Tone
b) Dialogue (creative decisions)
c) perspective (POV)

7. Denotation - the obvious (NO!)

8. Connotation

associations
symbols
inner meanings
interpretations
“I believe that one of the best ways of getting at truth is reflecting with others who have opposing views and who share your interest in finding the truth rather than being proven right.”

The 20s - The Jazz Age - Boom

There’s a mindset in this era that permeates aspects of the story. If you know that mindset, you can get more from the story. If you don’t, you are not understanding key bones in the story. 


The Blues Merchant

Titles - blues - blues music - 

2. Author - Jerome Washington - served time in prison - sounds like a “black” name (stereotype) - suffered from the typical American syndrome of being incarcerated for a crime he did not commit, however, he is the wrong colour for the justice system

Jail is a very segregated place, but in this story, the prisoners are united by the music 

WHY would this be appealing to this author, or to the POV character? 

For a black man, to be not conscious of his race as a definer of who he is must feel an amazing thing. - a glimpse into the black experience and it’s not even described in the piece

The writer might say - nope, didn’t put that in, don’t flatter yourself -

Context thing -> an observation that has an element in the story (reference, quotation) -> leads us to explore and explain the connection -> then we evaluate the importance and meaning

The above is not unlike what you would write in the body of an essay

Point proof

Observation - reference - explanation - example - meaning - importance

How does music help one to transcend? 

another analysis style is to ask a question that the piece gives us, then answer it, using the context, the source piece, and our thinking - reasoning and logic

The music creates a very personal interaction in the mind of the listener that is transportive - nobody can get into that and disrupt it. 













3. Style - structure 


Contrast - placing together elements (images of, the language of, the idea of) of freedom and containment (oppression) (captivity) 

the setting itself is a prison, obviously, but in the moment of the music’s power, the guards are not allowed to enjoy it and let themselves feel it, whereas the prisoners are, and in that moment those who truly feel it are free

the music somehow changes the perspective the prisoners have forced upon them by being imprisoned

the experience of listening, and feeling, the music supplants the feeling of being held prisoner

the music gives them back something that imprisonment takes from them

the freedom is actually: something normal - choice - music is normal! we take it for granted, but for the prisoners, it is a change to be normal 

by examining a contrast, we are presented with some focus points that take us to conclusions, possibilities, associations - and we can explain how we arrived at these conclusions - this is an answer, or an essay, or a report, or a seminar


prison is dehumanizing and music is rehumanizing




Friday, February 6, 2015

First Week!

Here we go!

TOOLS

Evernote - a note-taking tool that is online and is a magical way to organize info

Dropbox - a cloud storage app and site - don’t lose your stuff

Pocket - a bookmarking app that archives web sites - research

Blogger  - this is a personal blogging site - google - requires a gmail addy


@thelabcoatguy - Twitter

What do we do? WE MAKE YOU SMARTER FOR REAL

we put the responsibility on YOU - are you really trying to just pass? 

2. we think about what we really want - do you want something out of this? 

If you know what you want, then you WILL DO IT. 

MINDSET is the key to success, to the right marks, to enjoyment, to everything

Your brain literally creates reality for you. There is no other reality. 

Open-mindedness is the key to allowing that change.

The brain allows itself to be molded - the brain is plasticky - it can be changed. 

Is there an advantage to all this?  OBVIOUSLY

The key to getting what you want is to be aware of patterns and yourself.

In English class one of the key things we learn is ANALYSIS of text

This is also pattern based - once we start to learn the patterns, we can apply them to any text and get the proper results - it’s all about a kind of thinking

A pattern thinker can start there and then move on

DENOTATION - the actual, literal meaning of something

ie a chair is a chair and you sit on it

CONNOTATION - the figurative, symbolic, deeper or more layered meaning(s)

a cross is a pair of sticks in a cross pattern, but it is so much more

to decipher connotation requires a way of thinking - WHAT COULD THIS BE? 

What patterns are there? 

What are common patterns that have been used before? ie the cross, the swastika

The key here is evidence

We can use the lyrics of the song to help. 

We can look at the characters

Maps = what does the title mean?

We have to break things down and find the details and see what they MIGHT mean. 

In Glosoli - we had to look for clues in the video and find things that could be other things



Lobbster went to look at another video by the same band and director and saw a pattern. 

this is finding CONTEXT

The new relationship we can find by looking at things in relation to other things tells us a great deal. 

We’re trying to build some ways to analyze - a repeatable plan that we can ALWAYS go to, in any situation, that will help us to figure stuff out

When we know the context for the story-

for the writer 

for the place it was written 

the time it was written 

the ideas of culture that were happening at that time 

all these things affect the story

associations - building them, finding them, thinking about them, using them to generate meaning

these associations don’t have to be true in the artist’s mind to be valid

our interpretation is the part that is valid - your interaction with the art is your own and gives the meaning - it means that your explanation for your thinking is the whole key

using references and explanation how and why is the whole idea - this is the “right” answer

It is my job to teach you how to come up with an analysis structure that you can reproduce in any media, or any situation and find answers that work

Title 

Denotation

in a story, the elements of denotation are:

plot

setting 

character

A rudimentary (simplistic) answer in English is about these denotative things

Connotation

interpretation
associations
symbols
ideas that lead to other, bigger ideas
metaphors (controlling metaphors - ie the journey into the afterlife in Glosoli)

This stuff is harder to figure out properly - it takes work, and this is why we use a plan

Context is a great place to start

I want you to figure out the context for whatever it is that you’re doing. 

The context reveals A TON of information that will help guide any thinking, study, work, confusion, further questions, etc that you have in any situation

the circumstances around something - the time, the place, the situational elements, the meaning, the before and after, the circumstances thereof, the stuff that sits around the thing

The poet? 

The time period? 

The names in the piece? 

The place? 

Any key movement or cultural event in that era? 

etc

It might be useless, but it’s a GREAT place to start. 

In many ways, intelligence, or the APPEARANCE of intelligence, is about context. 


Gëstalt - the whole is greater than the sum of the parts - the whole is greater than the sum of the parts

The total is MORE and even DIFFERENT than the sum of the parts. 

Short Stories - 

Plot

- conflict
- rising tension
- chronology
- causal relationship (cause + effect)
- the three act structure - setup, complications, resolution

Setting

- mood/atmosphere
- place and time
- the “rules”
- context - this era = these ideas, preconceptions, etc

Character

- protagonist/antagonist/secondaries
- characterization
- character arc (arc of change, character development)
- realism 
- POV of a story

Theme
- moral (simplistic)
- universal communication - Big Ideas
- interpretation
- communication from artist to audience

Style/Structure (the form, the way it is done)

- grammar
- word choice (diction)
- devices

- approach of author

Read The Leap - p 190

1. Assess the author’s description of her mother - pull out some of the language that she uses - words and phrases - and tell me what you think is the effect of this very particular description

2. We agree that examining the title of a work can reveal or suggest something as to the meaning (or contribute to layers of meaning). Briefly evaluate the value of this title in such a way. 

3. Why do you think the author chose to write this story in first-person? What does that add to it? What does it take away? - 1st person = a biased view

What if this woman’s perspective on her mother, is ALL biased, and in fact, that is what the story is about? What if the mother is a normal woman, but this story is about how we see our parents as amazing, just because of our connection to them?

This story could be a little bit about that filter with which we see the world.

4. Creative Piece - write a brief character sketch (obviously not an actual sketch…) of your own mother and put it on a blog post via Blogger. 

Here is what I’m looking for in this piece:

good use of descriptive language
revealing character attributes of your mother
a rounded view of her - i.e. not focusing only on one aspect
well written in terms of style
use of first-person allows for your opinion and subjectivity

at least 200 words (about half a page) 

Next week - characterization, Wing's Chips, etc